The game called Dead Island!

On January,26/12 Friday after school Kyle was playing his xbox. He didn't play it that much cause he liked to go outside and hang out with his friends. He enjoyed hanging out with his friends, on Friday after dinner he was with his friends. They usually talked about call of duty modern warfare 3 but today all of his friends were talking about a game called dead island, Kyle didn't know what is was so he asked his friend Josh what it was about. THe first thing his friend you don't have dead island, you do quests for people, fight zombies with melee weapons and guns, and when you finish the quest and go back to the person that gave it to you they give you money, experience and a weapon. It's so fun Josh said and as Josh went on talking about the game Kyle wasn't listening he just wanted to get that game. So he told all his friends he would talk to them later.


On the way home all Kyle could think about was dead island and what he would do. The thing he said in his mind was I'm gonna do all the quest for that game and fight all the zombies along the way for experience. But Kyle forgot that he would have to do one thing first get his parents to get it for him. So when he got home at 6:30 he asked he dad beggingly if he would get him the game. His dad said yes but were are you gonna get the money from. Kyle knew his dad would say yes he never did say no to Kyle usually. So Kyle said that he would trade in one of his games to get it. So about 9:00 Kyle and his dad got back from the store to get the game. His dad said to him don't stay up all night but Kyle wasn't listening. Kyle imediatly went up stairs and played, he was talking to Kyle all night until 4:00 when Myles dad walked in and pulled the plug on Kyle's xbox, Kyle was furious but he went to bed. When Kyle woke up in the morning he went straight on his xbox, it was about 9:00 but Kyle didn't care. E was playing by himself he past the level of all his friends.


Kyle's dad came up the stairs and told him o get off the xbox, but Kyle gave him an angry stare and said NO!!!! Kyle's dad was shocked and grabbed Kyle's xbox aqnd said he's taking it away for a month. Kyle's only words were I'm runnig away you never let me do what I want, but even Kyle knew that was a lie. But Kyle's dad said know you won't and locked the xbox in his room. Kyle slammed the door and was passing he grabbed his back pack put some cloths in his bag grabbed his wallet and started to climb out his window his decided to leave a note that said I might never come back! So Kyle ran off thinking that he would be ok. Meanwhile Kyle's dad walked up to his room and the door and said Kyle I'm sorry, but he noticed that Kyle wasn't there. So he ran into his car drove down the street and saw Kyle and he said I'm sorry Kyle just looked with a blank stare.


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